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Living with a vampire[cap1]

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Mesaj Scris de nymphosi Vin Feb 05, 2010 7:33 pm

† Sunshine. Always makes me feel sick…..I look around this room….. a dark one. It looks like a cage….it’s a warm smell of roses in the air….I wonder what happened last night….where am I?.....and what’s going to happen with me?.......I‘ve got so many questions in my head. I get up in a lazy way and start to walk through this weird place. It really looks like a very old castle. The pictures on the walls, the candles from their wall supports…. and even the air! Everything seems to be so damn gothic. Now I follow this long passage which gets me through a huge room full of all kind of mirrors. They were everywhere!...On every wall, on the ceiling, on the floor, so you can walk on them, and even the door was having some mirrors on it. All I could see was only myself. While looking around at every mirror, I saw something…I think it was a guy, but when I tried to watch again, he disappeared. I turned around but in front of me, my eyes saw again that weird person which seems to be quite beautiful^_^ His ice-blue eyes were deeply watching me as he was trying to get deep in my mind. For a few moments I felt I couldn’t control myself anymore…felt like I couldn’t move my body.....and my mind was blank. But suddenly he turned around and I finally recovered control over myself.
“What’s going on kid?...” he asked me with a wonderful deep voice “Nothing at all dude…I was just searching for the exit” “There is no exit for you in this place” he said and then he turned around ”I don’t want to let you go. Not when I found you.” Well I was kind of confused….I didn’t know what he was up to. I don’t know how, but I realized that won’t hurt me. It was a strange feeling that I couldn’t understand. He was a really nice guy but I was trying to look scared….trying to hide my real mood. Suddenly the distance between us became inexistent. He embraced me gently and spoke to me in a low voice” Follow me through the darkness….please”.
I became confused again. I didn’t know what to say. Now I must choose….To spent my life like a normal dude, as usual, or to became kind of weird, like a zombie. What should I say? I don’t want to hurt him. I would like to spend all my life with a guy like him…but this means to let my normal life turn to dust. Damn it, it’s just a stupid question but it has such a difficult answer. It’s like choosing between life and death…A normal person would choose life, of course, but I don’t wanna be like the others…! And that’s why I chose to stay with him. I don’t care if I live or die, I’m tired of normal people! I need something new….something weird. Something like his lifestyle.
“Alright dude. I’ll follow you. Forever. I promise.” His eyes started to shine, watching me with astonishment. He can’t believe that I decided to follow his way. In that moment, everything seemed to be so unreal for him. It was fucking weird but I know what he was feeling. It was like a sweet dream. Everything was happening so fast…
“B…but……Are you quite sure?....I mean…Could you spent all your life with me in such a dark castle?”…..His frozen eyes where still watching me.
“Hey, don’t worry. I’m sure this is an interesting place….And you’re a damn cute guy too”*giggle*…..”but I still can’t understand how I got here….I can’t even remember what happened last night. Can you please tell me?” It became interesting. Finally, I was going to find out what happened to me last night.
“Well it isn’t a long story…I was just….”suddenly, the maid came into the room…”So sorry to disturb you, master, but your brother is here. Should I invite him to talk with you face to face or should I..”~” I shall come and talk with him, thanks Maya” he said
very proud. And then turning around to me:” I’m so sorry but looks like I must tell you the story after I’ll discus with my brother” Actually I was kind of sad `cause I wish I would have discovered how I got in this place….”No, it’s ok….I’ll wait here.” He turns around and walks through the door.” Take care while I’m away” and closes the door behind him….

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Mesaj Scris de Bittersweet* Vin Feb 05, 2010 8:39 pm

Vampirii:X..sper ca nu sunt stephenie meyer style:-s.Ai pus cam multe '...' si ai folosit de doua ori chestii gen:'*giggle*'.Incearca sa renunti la ele pentru ca nu arat bine.Cred ca am observat niste greseli,dar oricum nu le mai vad acum.
Si persoana care s-a trezit e o tipa?Pentru ca lasa impresia ca e un tip.O sa muste pe cineva?Vreau sangeeee:)).
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Mesaj Scris de ~Aiyume~ Sam Feb 06, 2010 1:18 am

Exact asta vroiam sa stiu si eu... E fata sau baiat???
Oh, ador stilul in care ai scris ^^
Actiune, treburi... In sensul ca... Tind sa trec peste descriere foarte repede, daca se axeaza pe o singura idee sau pe o singura imagine. Dar tu ai trecut foarte repede peste anumite chestii, care m-au facut sa vreau mai mult.
Si imi place ca scrii in engleza. Am evitat sa scriu in engleza, stiind ca eun Forum romanesc... Dar imi place cum ai scris, asa ca Well Done!
Gambatte si da-mi o continuare repede "Dude"
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Mesaj Scris de nymph Sam Feb 06, 2010 3:06 pm

e fata:))
fata fiind eu:))
si dah,intregul fic e plin de greseli
nu st atenta cand scriu,ma grabesc apoi citesc rpd,fara sa sesizez greselile
my bad Embarassed

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Mesaj Scris de Shiba-san Dum Feb 07, 2010 5:28 pm

Nu ai 20 de posturi si nici acord. Voi trimite topicul la arhiva pana cand iti va veni randul.
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